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Article Evaluation
Talk:Kyzylkungei Hydroelectric Power Plant

Possible articles to work on:
1.Wind power in South Korea

- This article is extremely brief and although it is factually correct, the first citation on the page - (1.) - does not work. It is necessary to replace this citation to a functioning link.

- Although the article's information is relevant to the topic of wind power in South Korea, much more information can be added about a subject of this vastness.

- For example, information and photographs can be provided about the different off and on-shore windfarms in South Korea, such as the recently opened Tamra offshore windfarm (officially opened on 17 November 2017), which can cover the electricity needs of roughly seven thousand Korean Households (https://www.offshorewind.biz/2017/11/17/south-koreas-first-commercial-offshore-wind-farm-goes-live/). The page should be updated to show capacity and generation of wind power for 2018 and 2019, and provide information about specific projects which will help South Korea to reach its wind power goals.

2. Bali Declaration by Climate Scientists

- No citations are given for the information in this article. If I were editing it, I would provide more valid citations, which reference information about the Bali Decalaration by Climate Scientists, and would replace broken hyperlinks such as: http://unfccc.int/essential_background/convention/background/items/1353.php which is written as 'Article 2'.

- I would provide more information about the Bali Declaration, potentially from the following website: https://www.sciencedaily.com/releases/2007/12/071206105136.htm. Using this source, I'd provide more details about the specific goals of the Declaration to " to cut greenhouse gas emissions, with a window of only 10-15 years for global emissions to peak and decline, and a goal of at least a 50 per cent reduction by 2050", as well as quotations from the scientists about specific efforts which they state must be taken to fulfil this goal.