User:Birmaniahern/Delta-8-Tetrahydrocannabinol/Eresha8 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Birmaniahern


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Birmaniahern/Delta-8-Tetrahydrocannabinol?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Delta-8-Tetrahydrocannabinol

Evaluate the drafted changes
The changes that have been made to the leading section of this article do a great job teasing out the background information of this topic and better informs the readers of the most important aspects of this topic. This information added throughout the article is relevant, but needs citations to support the claims. Most statements are clear, but one specifically; " While most states have legalized ∆8-THC, a handful have not leading to confusion." could use some rewording to be made more clear. I do think the information that has been crossed out doesn't help the article, so it is a good move to remove this part. Overall I think the additions and tweaks you plan to change in this article are beneficial. It can be further improved by adding more citations, specifically meta-analyses, to support your points.