User:Birmaniahern/Delta-8-Tetrahydrocannabinol/Hkhan11 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Birmaniahern


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Birmaniahern/Delta-8-Tetrahydrocannabinol?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Delta-8-Tetrahydrocannabinol

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Good start, I like how you started with a brief history of what Delta-8 is and its current legality issues in the country. In your effects section, as a suggestion, would go into more detail of how Delta-8 can help alleviate pain and with anxiety disorders and such. All in all, it is a good start and everything is detailed. The lead goes into brief detail on what the article will be about and the edits are neutral to the topic. Sources are also uptodate.