User:Biubiu44/Immediate early genes/Trevorburnes Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Biubiu44


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Biubiu44/Immediate_early_genes?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Immediate early gene

Evaluate the drafted changes
Draft overview includes pertinent information about the genetic makeup of IEGs and how the IEGs are up and down regulated. This maybe would work better in another category, as it is more focusing on properties of IEGs rather than what IEGs do/what sets them apart as genes. More hyperlinks to other wikipedia articles would be good here as well (to RhoA-actin, etc)

Small thing under Functions first paragraph: get rid of however. Section on memory formation is cogent and informative. For both the schizophrenia and memory formation paragraphs, I think you're supposed to cite after every sentence, not 100% on that one though.

Overall great job, some minor grammatical edits as well but other than that looks good.