User:Bizzers03/Glycine receptor/Cgeneb09 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)

Bizzers03


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Bizzers03/Glycine receptor


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Glycine receptor

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The additions you've made look great so far. I like that you added the part about how the glycine receptor changes with age. I think one thing you could do is to improve your inclusion of the idea that the Glycine Receptor changes function from the time of being an embryo to the time of being an adult.

Lead: In the lead, it could be helpful to introduce that idea quickly. Maybe you could add a sentence about it after the second sentence, or even edit the third sentence to include it.

Figure: I think it would be more beneficial for that figure that you added to be at the top of the article because it has a more complete structure of the receptor, rather than the neurotransmitter.

Function: One thing that reading your article made me wonder is the cause for the receptor switching to an inhibiting receptor. Do you think you could include that in either the adult or Embryo section?

These are all suggestions, but don't worry about applying them if you don't like them! Again, they're just suggestions.

-I meant to include the cause for the function switching to be inhibitory, so I will definitely add that! Thanks for the feedback!! Bizzers03 (talk) 02:54, 10 December 2021 (UTC)