User:Bjohn2548/Tituba of Salem Village/Cryoung4 Peer Review

General info
(User:Bjohn2548)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Bjohn2548/sandbox:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Tituba of Salem Village:

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * I know you are still working on your stuff, but I reviewed what was in the Sandbox as well as what was already on the article. The plot summary has a good start, but definitely needs to be expanded on. The structure you have set up for the article is a great way to do it. Separating it into chapters is a good path. Try to include more themes if you are able too. Overall, a great structure and I know you will do great!