User:Bkspade/Beard–Eaves–Memorial Coliseum/Auburnen Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
The article is already very interesting because I didn't know that these famous artists performed in the Coliseum, much less that the Coliseum even had concerts! It looks like you're still working on the article, so I don't have all that much to critique. I would say to add some sort of lead giving a basic introduction about the performances given there. Although the graphs are very easy to comprehend, there should also be some expansion on the performances given. It is written in a very neutral and educated tone. Your sources are all great sources and the picture is great too. The article just needs more information, but like I said, I'm sure you're just still working on it! Great job so far!