User:Blackpnk/Carmen Leon/Lapraucla Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Blackpnk


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Carmen Leon


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Same as above.

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1) Bibliography- Change the last sentence from 'Carmen received the Calabash Award as visual artist of the year, for her career as a painter and teacher in 2003.' to 'Leon received the Calabash Award as visual artist of the year, for her career as a painter and teacher in 2003.' Unless you personally know the artist, it's more formal to consistently use their last name to address them as the subject of your sentence.
 * 2) Art- For the last bulletpoint, are you able to find the citation for the book Contextos: Poemas by Juvenal Acosta Hernández? I think it would help by at citing it properly in your references list.