User:Blairgreen05/Linguistic Atlas Project/Rcouch13 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Blairgreen05


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Evaluate the drafted changes
I think this is an extremely good start to a Wikipedia page. There are headings that go in depth to different parts of the LAP, as well as subtexts and citations throughout the paper. The summary at the very beginning is precise and detailed, while also still being easily understandable for people that might not be familiar with the LAP or Linguistics as a whole. I think maybe more references and citations, as well as adding some pictures would enhance the rest of this article.