User:Blairgreen05/Linguistic Atlas Project/Tslays Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I am peer reviewing BlairGreen05's group.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Blairgreen05/Linguistic_Atlas_Project?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * There currently is not one.

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The article was an excellent read that provided so much good information on the topic. I did notice some grammatical errors in the first and second paragraph that kind of make it hard to understand what thee sentence was attempting to convey. However, the lead was pretty good. This team did a great job in giving a detailed explanation about the Atlas Project and showing the audience what direction the article is headed. I would really just suggest going back and proofreading some of your work. I would also suggest something along the lines of adding more content to Project Overviews. I just don't think that there was enough information provided to justify giving all of them their own section. Don't forget to fix your sources at the end too. Overall you guys are providing some excellent information.