User:Blasianmanda/Choose an Article

Option 1

 * Article title
 * "Bubble Tea" | Bubble tea
 * Article Evaluation
 * This article's content is relevant to the topic with
 * In terms of bias and being neutrally written, this article does involve a couple sources from news articles rather than more academic sources. Each claim does not have a citation, for instance, the article implies in the description section that the oldest bubble tea is Taiwanese Black tea. However it does not include where this information/fact was found. Additionally, this article also has some bias as well, for example, mentioning in the lead that the most popular bubble teas are Black milk tea and Green milk tea, in which to others may not be the case and think source to back this up was a news article... The article also has a sections titled, "Types" which discusses the types of Bubble tea, unfortunately, it only address the types of bubble tea to an extent and I feel like this section could be improve especially since lately there has been more different types of bubble tea invented throughout the years. Needs to be updated and improved; "Types" sections, history, cultural impact section, and especially the health concerns sections since majority of the sources come from News rather than research containing abstracts or academic sources/books.
 * Sources
 * The book "The Japanese Occupation of Malaya and Singapore, 1941-45: A Social and Economic History" by Paul Kratoska
 * I would use this because it discusses the social and economic history and involves key words such as: Rice, Tapioca, Food Security, etc. I believe this academic source could convey more information regarding the history of Tapioca and Bubble tea since Tapioca goes along with bubble tea.
 * Are Bubble Tea Pearls Safe? We asked a doctor for the facts.

Option 2

 * Article title
 * "Crown Royal"
 * Article Evaluation
 * This article has been rated C-class, mid-importance under wikipedia Food and drink due to the project's quality. It is also rated C-class low-importance under WikiProject Canada. The article's content is relevant to the topic of Crown Royal. It breaks down this liquor brand into sections: (1) Origins, (2) Production, (3) Current Bottling, (4) Discontinued Variations, (5) Ratings and (6) Advertising which are all relevant to the topic, however it does not flow with the lead, in fact, this article does not really have a "lead" which is only one sentence. The lead also needs more improvement with including details regarding what the other sections of the article will talk about. The citations are reliable in a sense, they are many sources from other wikipedia articles and I did not come across a News article in the references. I've noticed throughout the "Talk" page, other wikipedians are mentioning that this article seems more like an advertisement. I could understand this suggestion due to the fact that there is an "advertisement" section itself.  Sources
 * Top 7 Surprising Benefits of Whiskey
 * I would use this source to most likely replace the "Advertisement" section with Benefits of Whiskey, since Crown Royal is a whiskey and maybe there could be two sections with benefits and one with health concerns right under neath that section that way it would not be biased but presents both sides.
 * "Effects of Alcohol"

Option 3
In order to expand the origin section of the article, hopefully hitting/improving some of those C-class rated categories.
 * Article title
 * Black Panther Party :
 * Article Evaluation:
 * The article content does relate to the topic at hand and it is for the most part neutrally written, but includes some bias as well. Majority of the claims do have citations, I would probably improve these areas. The citations provided are for the most part reliable, majority if not almost all, are sources from books, audio books, and are academic sources that surround the topic. Overall, This article is rated C-class in Wikipedia; Sociology, Socialism, African Diaspora, Political parties, Discrimination, and Philosophy. It does not include the murders of Fred Hampton and Mark Clark throughly enough. The article does not mention how this organization helped other minority groups, I feel like this portion should be included because they did protect many other minorities. The "Political Activities" section could also use some improvement and this would help the rated C-class political portion. There should be an explantation in this section about the Black Panther Party minister, Eldridge Cleaver running for office. It mentions it, but does not go much into detail. And it also mentions how the B.P.P was influential on the White Panther Party, however, it does not provide how.
 * Sources:
 * "On the ground: The Black Panther Party in communities across America" - Judson Jeffries
 * This source would be help to the adding how the Black Panther Party has helped out other communities within America and what they did as an organization for communities. (This was what I mentioned in something I would like to add to this article in the article evaluation) ^
 * Black Panther Party
 * Origins of Black Panther Party Health Activism

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Malaysians
 * Article Evaluation
 * I want to write about this because I'm half Black (Dad) and half Malaysian (mom). The article's content is very relevant to the topic. However, this article is rated C-class on project's scale quality.
 * Is the article's content relevant to the topic?
 * Is it written neutrally?
 * Does each claim have a citation?
 * Are the citations reliable?
 * Check out the article's Talk page to see what other Wikipedians are already contributing. Consider posting some of your ideas to the article's Talk page, too.
 * Sources

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Ao Haru Ride (Anime)
 * Article Evaluation
 * Sources
 * Sources