User:Blause Winterz/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating
Paris Hilton

Why have you chosen this article to evaluate?
I have chosen this article to evaluate because I want to know how much information is accurate and reliable so that I may use it for my own page.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

The introductory sentance does concisely describe the article's topic. The lead does provide a brief description of the article's topic and as far as I can tell there is no unique information in the lead then the rest of the article. Both the lead and the article have very similar inofrmation with the article having more. The lead is a little overly detailed and in my opinion it is a bit bias because it mentions Paris' leaked sex tape as one of her claims to fame. I don't like that, she has done so much more. The article is not neutral, I feel like it panits Paris as a skank and not so much as a business woman. I feel like the inofrmation on her upbringing is biased because what they are basically describing is an affluent 16 year old Paris, moves to NYC, gets a fake ID and then starts going to nightclubs which makes me go like, ok how do we know this? Is the writer sure she moved there as early as 16 years old? That doesn't make sense because I feel like her parents would've forced her to finish high school at least. The viewpoint of her sex tape and wild party years are definitly over represented. I feel like the article pursuades the reader to having a certain thought in their head about Paris. The article is relevant to it's content and is very up to date. I don't think there is any irrelevant content because it covers everything, the good the bad and the ugly. The article has an overall B rating. The article is in the B class for the genres of Los Angeles, New York State, Women, Women Writers, Women in Music, Pop Music, Biography, and Fashion.Blaise Winterhalter