User:Blause Winterz/Trina Parks the first Bond Girl of African decent/Gcordova1 Peer Review

General info
Blause Winterz
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Blause Winterz/Trina Parks the first Bond Girl of African decent::Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead


 * the lead needs some work explain the general overview of the article topic and trina parks
 * content
 * the content you have is relevant to the topic
 * the content is up to date
 * most of the information there is supposed to be there.
 * Tone and balance
 * the content is relatively neutral
 * no biasing in this article
 * Sources and references
 * I dont see any peer reviewed articles but this actor may not have any scholarly articles written about her
 * the sources are current and have diverse authors
 * the sources are up to date
 * the links work
 * Organization
 * The content is easy to read
 * I see no grammatical or spelling errors if so there are minimal
 * content is well organized into sections by date and her career beginning
 * Images and Media
 * there are no images or media yet
 * New article
 * reaches notability, lots of sources talking about Trina parks but no wiki page
 * The article does not link to any other articles to make it more discoverable, it can probably be linked to the james bond movies and the actor
 * Overall impressions
 * i think this article was pretty good, ther was a lot of sourcing and information. The formatting was clear an concise and it isnt confusing to read
 * a way to improve is by adding images and linking the article to other well known articles to make it more discoverable