User:Blause Winterz/Trina Parks the first Bond Girl of African decent/Hancun123 Peer Review

General info
Blause Winterz
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Blause Winterz/Trina Parks the first Bond Girl of African decent
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Evaluate the drafted changes
1.The article is filled with relevant information pertaining to Trina Parks' life and career.

2.I think the lead part is lack of neutrality, phrases like "remarkable woman", "trail blazer" something should be replaced with some neutrality words.

3.The article does a commendable job in detailing Trina Parks' career and impact, but it's heavily skewed towards a positive evaluation without any critical or different viewpoints, if there are any.

4.The draft does a good job of referencing facts.

5.Some of the references are not that reliable such as the IDMB something like that?

6.The article provides a comprehensive overview of Trina Parks' career from the 1970s to the present, which is good.

7.All the information are up to date and not missing special information.