User:Blazer00/Causes of autism/Samuel Raaflaub Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Blazer00


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Blazer00/Causes_of_autism?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * causes of autism

Evaluate the drafted changes
Minimal addition to the article so I will be reviewing mostly the original article. The lead of this article is relatively weak. It gives a good explanation that this is not a topic that is fully understood, but fails to reference many of the future sections or topics within the body. The contents of the topics were relevant to the article they were all written in a neutral point of view and well sourced. The sources used were good from what I looked at. There are many sources in this article with some of them being within the past 5 years although many of them are almost 15-20 years. There might be some new information to add if newer articles are researched. The topics within the article were well organized and builded on previous mentions in multiple occasions.