User:Blazer GB/James V. Neel/Sidneyjb Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Blazer GB


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * James V. Neel


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * James V. Neel

Evaluate the drafted changes
I believe this article is off to a great start! The lead sounds good, however I would add a portrait of Neel if possible. I think it would also be beneficial if there were more information written on his works with a slightly deeper dive into what he has done as a scientist. If possible, I would do some research to see if there are some more up to date resources to use for this information. Some aren't too old, but some others are quite a bit. This article does not seem to be persuasive, nor are there any under or overrepresented viewpoints. With a bit of a deeper dive into Neel's work, this article can further be improved.