User:Blazer GB/James V. Neel/TortyT Peer Review

After reading the article right away the banner says in line citations are needed in the article. The article has a neutral tone and just states some facts about James Neel. Adding a section about how he helped develop the field of genetic research. The article lightly covers his accomplishments with understanding the human genome. Or expand on the controversy that surrounds him with the research that was preformed in South America. Pictures that correspond with the sections would make the article more attention grabbing. The grammar and punctuation of the article are good. The lead does not have a description of all the sections in it but it is concise and to the point. The content needs to be backed by the inline citations that are suggested by the banner that is the first thing seen when clicking onto the page.

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