User:BlazethePanda/Sex differences in autism/Olive461 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

BlazethePanda


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:BlazethePanda/Sex_differences_in_autism?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article draft is amazing, there is comprehensive evidence from a variety of articles. The articles themselves come from many sources and all contribute well to the topic. The information is easy to grasp, and multiple uses of article evidence has been shown to support passages. There are no pictures yet and there are a few incomplete passages but that is to be expected. So far this is a very well rounded first draft with very little to change aside from pictures and finishing off passages.