User:Blibly/Yokohama Kaidashi Kikō/CitadelArchives009 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Blibly


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Blibly/Yokohama Kaidashi Kikō


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Yokohama Kaidashi Kikō

Evaluate the drafted changes
The summaries you provided for each episode are presented very well due to the fact that they are concise and presented in a non-biased format. I'm not sure if you're planning on providing a summary of the second OVA that's mentioned in the article, but I think it's something you could definitely include for your updated draft. Overall, I think you have a very well-written draft.