User:Bloomsnooze/The Love Fridge Chicago/LatinaPrincess2003 Peer Review

LatinaPrincess2003 (talk) 17:10, 10 April 2023 (UTC)LatinaPrincess2003 (talk) 17:08, 10 April 2023 (UTC)== General info ==


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Bloomsnooze


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 * User:Dear.Jang/sandbox2

The Love Fridge Peer Review
The information you provided is well executed and it's not at all repetitive. I also loved the subtitles you put into your page because it's easier to see everything than have everything jumble all at once, which can get really confusing for the reader at times. Not only is it nice but that section is talking about what is intended to do and I am not confused when reading it. All in all, I enjoyed reading and I loved all the information provided.

This article is well-written, but you should add a few things to make it even more awesome. I only can think of is just adding two items to it for the time being. One of them is adding more sources to your paragraphs. Like under the mission subtitle, I think you should find an article about what the significance of the painted fridges means to the community. Or even find an article about how those painted fridges helped represent the community and unite people. Lastly, I don't know if you are waiting to add pictures last into your article then great I think you should most definitely put a picture or two of painted fridges made by local artists.

Lastly, I would add more to the "fridge hosts" section. By what I mean is that what exactly does it mean to be a host? I mean do they have a rule? I mean I know the answer to the last one. I looked up because I felt like the section needed a little more. So, I add a sentence and a link to some of the host rules that The Love Fridge posted on their website. You are free to change it of course but I think it looks nice now.

Anyways great work and again I added a sentence and link at the end under the section "Fridge hosts" because it needed something more also great job again.

LatinaPrincess2003 (talk) 17:10, 10 April 2023 (UTC)