User:Bluebanisters11/Daniel Sotomayor/Jessranthony Peer Review

Lead

 * Daniel Sotomayor does not have a Wikipedia page currently, so the lead is only written entirely by my peer
 * The lead starts with the birthday, which I think should be moved to an early or personal life section
 * The second sentence makes a good introductory sentence
 * Needs descriptions of other section
 * Concise lead, but should be expanded a bit

Content, Tone, and Balance
The page currently does not have a lot of content, but what is written is neutral and balanced. It should be expanded to prove relevance for the topic and individual being written about.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(bluebanisters11) Daniel Sotomayor


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bluebanisters11/Daniel_Sotomayor?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)