User:Bluebunny12233/User:Bluebunny12233/sandbox/Acharymn Peer Review

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Bluebunny12233
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Lead:
This article has a good lead: it tells me what the article will be about.

Structure:

The article structure is good; the transition between the paragraphs looks good.

I do recommend you to rename the first paragraph.

Neutral Content:

The article is not neutral. The article is against cosmetic testing on animals. I recommend writing a paragraph on the other side about why they should test cosmetic products on animals.

Sources: This article needs sources, the article is providing significant details without backing them with sources. The sources that are provided are reliable.

some references do not have link attached, like reference #4 and 5

Recommendation: I recommend you create a new theme where you explain alternative way of testing cosmetic product.

"Instead of using animals they can use dead tissue from humans or animals, computer based modeling, and chemical analytical tests" - explaining theses methods and backing them with sources would make your article more credible.