User:Bluehunter19/Option for the poor/JS1833 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bluehunter19


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Bluehunter19/Option for the poor
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Option for the poor

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think this is a very good start, and you have a good amount of information when it comes to the reactions from various sources. I think you could make it better with a bit more commentary from parties that don't require direct quotations. I think an example of what Christian Smith is referring to either directly or indirectly from him could be beneficial.

Mention in what way the Puebla conference wanted the local communities to support the common people

I think you could split up some of your sentences in order to add more bulk to the paragraphs. There's plenty of sentences that have multiple parts that could be further explored.