User:Bluemarker06/Sketch comedy/Englishexaminer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bluemarker06


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bluemarker06/Sketch_comedy?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sketch comedy

Evaluate the drafted changes
You have written that the draft isn't complete and I appreciate seeing that note before going through the peer review process. Apologies for not having this in sooner but I was having trouble navigating the Wikipedia class. I didn't notice hardly any differences beteen the article and the draft but if I am mistaken on what I am reviewing I do apologize.

Going based off of what is in the sandbox draft I began with reviewing the lead section. I though it read very clearly and concisely, including only what it needs to for the information provided. I feel like you could go into a bit more information with the films and festivals sections as the history section is much longer than those and it dominates the majority of the article. The tone seems clear and consistengt thorugout as well. I checked a few of the sources and the links all seem to work. The sources seem diverse but you could possibly find a few more different ones to help make the other sections of the article longer. I think the organization of the article seems appropriate, it makes sense to start with the history and then move on to other ideas from there once you have provided the necessary background information.

Nice article so far!