User:Bluemoon41/Shahjehan Aapa/Sk8trgrl Peer Review

General info
Bluemoon41
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Bluemoon41/Shahjehan Aapa
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Lead

 * The added content by my peer has an introductory sentence that is concise and clear. The lead is also not overly detailed but includes all information needed in a brief description.

Content

 * The article does well in showing the early life and education and how it would affect her in her later feminist activism.
 * The content also is separated enough to show her life through eduction and the different places she lived as well as her early marriage.
 * The structure is clear with reliable sources as well.