User:Blueram1/Insect social networks/Sloth Mode Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Blueram1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Blueram1/Insect_social_networks?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Insect social networks

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good job, you presented a lot of new information on this topic that is essential in developing the existing article. By adding elements like photos you are aiding the reader in understanding the topic. The division of the information was also a good idea, this helps to organize the content. The references are also very good, they are reputable, and come from a variety of sources. One idea on how to further develop this article is to add information about how or why this happens. why is it that insects have social hierarchies? how do they decide who will be the queen? Another thing to consider may be to consider how things like environmental changes or humans affect these behaviours. You did well presenting each idea in a clear, concise, and unbiased way. Overall, your draft of the article was well done and made in a way that presented facts in a clear and unbiased way. There are a few things though that could develop this article a little more like exploring the biological basis of these behaviours.