User:Blugold763/Dermatophytosis/Divemaster26 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Blugold763


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Blugold763/Dermatophytosis


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dermatophytosis

Lead
The article itself provides a good overview of the topic, Dermatophytosis. Epidemiology lead provides a broad overview of the topic that is representative of a larger population. This section has good flow that reflects many aspects of the topic.

Content
Content contributed to this draft is extensive and relevant. No Epidemiology section existed in this article prior. The lead to this article provides a good introduction to the general Epidemiology before breaking down into Epidemiology by region or country. Information is concise and minimal filler words are used. Statistics are provided to reflect data from sources.

Tone and Balance
Content uses neutral language and is factual. There is good balance within the draft and no aspect takes over too much space of the article. Draft content does not draw conclusions but represents factual information relevant to the topic.

Sources and References
Sources for this contents are peer reviewed and reliable. Most are dated within the past decade, with the exception of one. References are properly cited. Citations are found in the article to show source of information.

Organization
Article is well organized into sections. A suggestion would be to put the subsections on the epidemiology by country, into alphabetical order for better flow unless there is a reason for the current organization (Ex: Africa, Brazil, India, Iran).