User:Bmaghen/Sonoporation/Trevorburnes Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

BMaghen


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bmaghen/Sonoporation?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sonoporation

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Mechanism section does good job at introducing reader to 3 possible mechanisms of sonoporation. Diction is at an undergraduate level, which for this article is probably okay.

If you could find a picture from another wikipedia page/creative commons showing at least one of the 3 mechanisms I think that'd be a helpful visual aid.

The in vitro section could be slightly expanded from the drug delivery side. Besides that everything is good in this section.

In the microbubble section, you explain the mechanism very well and in plain language.

Good mix of primary and secondary sources.