User:Bmallery99/Developmental psychology/Danielletjm2001 Peer Review

Hi there! I'm not sure which parts of the Developmental psychology page you're planning on adding to, but it looks like the "stability vs. change" section needs citations, so perhaps you could find some resources and add to there. I also noticed that there is also some strong language in the "stability vs. change" section, so it could be good to make the language more neutral while finding more citations to add. Otherwise, some other short sections are "Constructivism," "Theories of cognitive development," and "Language." I noticed that in the "Language" section there is a lot more that can be added about babies' language other than just babbling, so that might be a good addition, too.

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