User:Bmdbt/Janet Gourlay/Kylebushman Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Bmdbt


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bmdbt/Janet_Gourlay?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Janet Gourlay

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: Very straight forward and clear. Doesn't say too much, highlights significant information

Tone and Balance: No sense of bias. Balanced description of relevant events with interesting information

Sources: Checked a couple of the sources. They appear to be relevant and contented with good reliable information

Organization: The content is very well-organized and shows a clear plan for moving the article forward

Overall: This is a promising start and provides a lot of new relevant information that is important to the understanding of Gourlay