User:Bmgfmg/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Jenni Rivera

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have chosen to evaluate this article because it is one I have become familiar with, seeing as we have reviewed and edited some of it during class. This article on Jenny Rivera is of particular importance due to her influence as an artist and her impact on many people. In particular, her music and style throughout her life inspired many Latinx women by giving them a space to express themselves. My first impression of Jenni's page was that it could use some cleaning up in terms of clarifying and condensing certain information and expanding more on particular topics.

Evaluate the article
To start, in terms of content, the introductory sentence is clear and concise. However, the lead section could be condensed and the information could be spread more evenly throughout the other sections in the article. Such as adding more information into the sections detailing her 'Style" and "Charity Work." In this manner, it could use some more organization, but it it easy to read. Moving forward, when considering the tone, it has a relatively neutral tone throughout the article. Perhaps in some sections regarding her "Childhood" and other personal information, a softer tone is taken with presenting the information, but nothing major and it could be updated if needed be. Furthermore, looking at the sources used throughout the article, it has a nice variety including websites, articles, and interviews. All the links work and the images and media that it includes are relevant to the topic. The images in particular are well-captioned and dated. The only comment would be to see if more peer-reviewed articles could be included into the article. Now, on my side I do not see much activity on the talk page, I am not sure if information was deleted, but I can see that it has a very active view page. In the end, my overall impression is that this articles has a lot of strengths. Including, but not limited to the fact that it is has a wide variety of information and there is much to read about. From my perspective there are no major gaps in terms of content about her. Once again, the only major comment would be that perhaps the information as a whole could be more organized.