User:Bmharden2/The Vanishing Half/Sarahcm12 Peer Review

General info
Bmharden2
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:The Vanishing Half
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):The Vanishing Half

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Really glad that you added performance and acting and passing sections under themes. After our discussions in class, these were two large takeaways of mine and add to the final message of the novel.
 * Nonlinear narrative structure was a great addition to this article. It is one of the more characteristic pieces of the novel and important information for someone to know while looking at the book at a glance.
 * Everything seems to be from a neutral POV: you do a great job at relaying factual information. Especially on the themes section.
 * Great job with the synopsis section. Your points are clear and telling of what goes on in the novel from a narrative perspective.
 * Reception section: Adding negative, positive, and mixed reviews propose different reactions and thoughts regarding this novel. This is very effective in keeping the article unbiased.
 * The info box is a clear way to add basic information, great.
 * The information about the HBO series is a great piece of information for this article.
 * Links look great. Smart to add them to words that may need more context/definition.
 * Overall, your article is effective and concise and serves as a great refresher for the novel. Well done!!