User:Bmkler23/Canadian stepdance/Turny1516 Peer Review

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Bmkler23


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 * Canadian stepdance
 * Canadian stepdance

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Your edit is straight forward and makes the paragraph feel more concise and put together, and helps to end the paragraph. I feel it would be beneficial to mention that there have been efforts to revive step dancing in Scotland.