User:Bmkler23/Canadian stepdance/Uilleam1 Peer Review

General info
Bmkler23
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Bmkler23/Canadian stepdance
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Canadian stepdance

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think this addition added a lot to the cohesiveness and stability of this artice as a whole; awesome work. I like how much text was added, it really supplied a lot of information to an article that was in need of it.