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Book Censorship Evaluation (Chase Shea)

 * Your addition of the book burning section provides the reader with great information that is relevant to the topic and helpful for understanding book censorship as a whole. It could be beneficial to add examples where this happened, what the outcome was, and what the initial motivation was as well.
 * However, some of your sentence structures are the same and it would help the flow of the paragraph if some of these were rearranged.
 * In the "Banning Books" sections, you discuss many important examples of how parents and schools actively ban books from their classrooms. While discussing their goals, it could be helpful to provide more detail about each of these ways. Maybe some background behind the ALA, what their original intention was, etc.
 * The section that gives the reasons for book censorship is really helpful! I think it is important to include all of these differences and reasonings. However, giving examples as to specific instances when this happened would give the reader a deeper understanding of these reasons.