User:Bnesheim3/Suicide prevention/Mtcstt Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) bnsesheim


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Suicide_prevention&action=edit&section=6 Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I took the medication portion out of the article because i thought it would fit better down the strategies for the prevention of suicide. Although medication can help i took it out because it seemed repetitive. I thought that there was a lot of information in this article that could be important but in order to prevent suicide i think the page should have put the warning signs at the top so people know what their family members are going through.