User:Bnl11/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Kristin Neff


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is a stub-class article. This article has no sections other than a lead section. All of the presented information is cited and in a neutral tone, but there is information surrounding Kristin Neff's life and career that could be added. Sections on her life, education, career (books shes written, TedTalks) and research are potential sections that could be added.


 * Sources

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Vancouver Sleep Clinic


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is start class, and it has a warning at the top that it needs citations for verification. Outside of the lead section, none of the information is cited (and the references I clicked on did not seem to be super reliable). Information could also be added on the genre (it is not referenced in the article, and the infobox has a list of a diverse variety of genres that could likely be narrowed down) and its production/record label involvement. More information could also be added on the reception of the music. A "battle to get free from their record label" is mention that could also be expanded upon (and the phrasing adjusted to be more neutral).


 * Sources

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Forks Over Knives


 * Article Evaluation
 * This film article is in the start class. As it is a film article, in addition to the summary and reception categories that it already has, production and release categories should also be added. I also think that some of the citations could be more clearly structured/placed throughout the article.


 * Sources

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Bobrisky


 * Article Evaluation
 * This was an article I evaluated in an earlier exercise; it is a start class article. A significant amount of references need to be added to verify statements and the language could be made more neutral. Additionally, there have been some recent events surrounding Bobrisky that could be important to add. However, there does not seem to be many "reliable" resources surrounding her and her life. There are possibly resources about legislature and treatment surround LQBTQ+ folx and specifically transgender folx in Nigeria that could be added as supportive information and to verify some of the other statements.


 * Sources

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Pearl Cleage


 * Article Evaluation
 * This is a start-class article. It could use more references/citations, particularly in the lead section, and expanded information on the author's works. It also slightly seems that some of the language used could be a bit to the side of neutral.


 * Sources