User:Bnthomas17/Gates of the Arctic National Park and Preserve/Mangodulce Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bnthomas17


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bnthomas17/Gates_of_the_Arctic_National_Park_and_Preserve?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
They already added the changes to the article

there changes were concise and factual

great information on the impact of climate change in the park!

The Gates of the Arctic is a very short Wiki page compared to other parks, I think more information could be added page

Permafrost thaw is also influences the park so you might want to look into that