User:Bokchoychoy

Response to Peer Review

Hi Bokchoychoy, I really appreciated your review of my edits I thought they were informative and concise and they allowed me to feel more confident about my work. I think that you also brought up some useful and relevant points especially about the syntax of my sentences - they are a bit awkward sometimes. I appreciate the thoroughness of your review and think that it has helped me refine the work I have compiled so far.