User:Bonil009/sandbox

Notes on Climate Change Article: The second sentence is a little clunky and could be worded better. The first sentence in the causes paragraph doesn't have a citation to back up the claim it's making. There were no citations for the subheading on proxies. There was no discussion on biodiversity in the climate change article. I think this article is semi-protected because climate change has become such a politically charged topic, especially for Americans. Less than 40% of Americans reject climate change, and heck even our President denies it.

Notes on Effects pf climate change on plant biodiversity: I"m surprised there was no mention of denitrification or phosphorous on the page. These are two key nutrients to ecosystems and denitrification specifically can change plant biodiversity. The section of Higher level changes, doesn't fell necessary and the statement could probably be fit into the general effects subheading.