User:Bonita2525/sandbox

About me
I'm a gamer and dancer that is from Mexico city. I usually play with friends and people I meet through the games I play online. I was taught by family how to dance and like to teach others. I'm also interested in psychology, so I could help others in need when having problems with friends or family. I'm also interested in helping animals in need. Animals are like family.

My Wikipedia interests
If I'm active on Wikipedia in the future, I want to let people know that theirs help if there going through tough situations. I will publish a page about psychology. Awareness of cognitive and emotional health referencing other sources that display the benefit of creating relationships between animals (including us people) and how to maintain them with group activities.

Article Evaluation
I've been interested in Lil Mosey ever since he released his album North best, I also want to support his music, since he's from MountLake Terrace, Washington. That inspires me because he became successful while being from Snohomish County.I visited Lil Mosey's page on Wikipedia and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: Background information, organization, and public image.

Background information
The first element most people notice when they load a Wikipedia page is the picture of the person, place, object, or idea and right below that you will notice a background the background gives the necessary info to distinguish it as an original topic.The page does its job in putting Lil mosey in a general category like hip hop and trap but it would make the information more credible if they were more specific. Lil mosey gets his unique sound from Atlanta Trap style and i don't see that.

Public image
It's apparent that most Wikipedia pages never leave/ or neglect the idea of an artist's/ celebrity's influence on the general population and social media. Lil Mosey's page did provide brief references to interviews that were biased and made him seem negative, and his highlighted achievements were of the releases of his singles. I think the page could do a better job talking about the current work he is doing especially trying to be an influence and support to other rising artist's in the Seattle area.

Organization
A quick fix to the page without adding more info would be organization. The page has sufficient relevant info on the success of his career but they do a bad job mentioning his music releases that could be grouped by year instead of having a scattered timeline. It would make the page neater and less amateur.

Summary
Overall, I think the page is below average but it is getting close to being up to the standard of mainstream artist. Lil Mosey is relatively new to the hip hop scene and is very young still so i would give it a few more years before his page starts looking solid. With more people discovering Lil Mosey's style and talent it will give active editors the motivation to go in depth with his upcoming projects and activities.