User:Bonniedog11/Incarceration in the united states/Ema1207 Peer Review

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Bonniedog11
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Bonniedog11/Incarceration in the united states
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Incarceration in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
The edits that you have contributed so far are great! I think that if you add a little more specifics about the abuse women face using examples from a scholarly source that would help validate the statistics that you included. If you could find a chart from the scholarly source to include to allow viewers of this article to visualize the statistics as well would help validate the statistic further. Also, try to find more up-to-date statistics about the incarceration rates of black women in America and you can draw connections from those statistics as to whether or not the rate has increased or decreased and what can be done if the statistics have gotten worse. Keep up the great work!