User:Booklover30/Psychiatric-mental health nurse practitioner/Haylee Petroski Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Booklover30


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Booklover30/Psychiatric-mental_health_nurse_practitioner?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Psychiatric-mental health nurse practitioner

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really enjoyed reading your article that you have chosen and the changes you made. I am also interested in becoming a nurse practitioner and after reading about a PMHNP, made me want to look more into this field for my interest. You added reliable content for this article that does not need any correcting. All i would say from my opinion, is adding extra information to each topic to make it seem more detailed and a full looking to each section. First, i checked all the sources you have provided, and they all work. It is also all up to date with the information you have added. What i would add is a title to the first body paragraph. It is the intro of this article where you can title it as "Psychiatric Mental Health Nurse Practitioner (PMHNP)". This will explain that it is the starting of the article and leads into the definition of a PMHNP. The Education section is full and what you added was a great finish touch for it. For the "Characteristics" section i would add more skills and responsibilities about a PMHNP. I did my article on "Nurse Anesthetist", and i made a topic on skills and responsibilities and explained what their main skills are and then made bullet points for each responsibility that they will need in their everyday work life. After adding that information, it made that section look full and detailed for the reader to interpret better. Lastly, you can also add a bullet point formation to the "Practice settings" section. There are many reliable sources i found on the internet that gave me a step to step look on a Nurse Anesthetist that you can find for a PMHNP. I would also add a section on a PMHNP's annual salary and where it varies in other states. If you decide to add this to your article, you can explain how the salary will increase when you move higher into the position and have been in that field for a certain amount of time. You can even add that information to your section called “Labor Shortages”, and explain the salary they make now and during COVID-19 since the shortages should be changing. Overall the content that you added definitely improved the overall quality of the article. The sections you have added will make the readers interpret more of the importance of a PMHNP rather than just the education that was first presented.