User:BoyaJia666/Bad habit/JPMolina02 Peer Review

Great article! It has a good flow and shoes an unbiased voice to bad habits. A small bit that I would consider add is near the end when you list St Alponsus Ligouri's effects of bad habits. Perhaps add a small section that explains why he stated these reasons. I know it is supposed to be a summary, however one or two scentences should be good to inform the reader. I belive your 12th source should help with this.

Other minor recommendations

"One good one it to go" - suggest changing this to "an effective technique is or a popular one

Perhaps give one example on how it is better to stop habits during childhood

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Boyajia666


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 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bad_habit


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