User:Bpertzborn20/Childhood cancer/Ericksmd3839 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bpertzborn20


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Childhood cancer


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

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Hi! While looking through your sandbox it looks like you have a really good start on your article. I really liked that you chose to talk about the statistics on childhood cancer since I think talking about the statistics is a big part of the class. I think it is important that you are talking about the statistics in different countries since illness varies by zip code. Public health deals greatly on zip code and location. If a country has less hospital access then illness will be greater.