User:Bradley Silvernail/Africa-South Korea Relations/Kwashi20 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Bradley Silvernail

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bradley_Silvernail/Africa-South_Korea_Relations


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bradley_Silvernail/Africa-South_Korea_Relations

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead: As per my suggested edits, I recommended that the authors establish with their readers, what was the "tension", if applicable, between various African Countries and South Korea. Once this has been established, then discuss the countries involved and why these countries strove to establish republics. The lead does the following well: briefly discusses the sections and does not include information that is not present in the article.

Content: The article is up to date and relevant to the topic at hand. However, it does not expand on the claims made, nor does it deal with Wikipedia's content gap.

Tone and Balance: The article tends to be persuasive. There are a few instances of unsupported claims, or ones that lack background before being used. Those that were cited, were used properly and the links work, but when cited under references, they were not cited correctly for Wikipedia.

Organization: The structure was great! I was able to follow along nicely.

Images and Media: No images or other media was used.