User:Bradley graul/sandbox

Hey it's Jack Crunick,

My sources for my article are https://www.iup.edu/pse/undergrad/early-childhood-special-education-bsed/

https://www.iup.edu/pse/undergrad/early-childhood-special-education-bsed/

Content


 * 1) The section added is comprehensive detailing the characters.
 * 2) The texts added are relevant to the wikipedia article.
 * 3) They aren't duplicates of other sections.

Organization


 * 1) The additions are added in a logical fashion.
 * 2) I think the additions flow well and show the characters throughout the game.
 * 3) I think it adds well with the rest of the sections and adds new content to the article.
 * 4) The text is free of grammatical errors.

Tone


 * 1) The tone is neutral and just describes characters in the game.

Sources

- New article. Created November 13th, 2018, but not edited until February 4th, 2019 (Last Monday).
 * 1) The source is relevant it is the developer of the game.

- Recently released free video game.

- I plan on adding the list of the 8 characters, or legends, into the article.

Legends (Edit)
 Bangalore-  Passive Ability(Double Time): While under fire player gets a boost of speed while sprinting. Tactical Ability(Smoke Launcher): Fires smoke projectile that turns into 3 separate smoke grenades on impact. Ultimate Ability(Rolling Thunder): Player calls in "Rolling Thunder" that carpet bombs designated area.

 Bloodhound-  Passive Ability(Tracker): Enemies leave behind footprints. Tactical Ability(Eye of the All-father): Reveals enemy players and traps for a short time. Ultimate Ability(Beast of the Hunt): Allows player to move faster and highlights enemies.

 Caustic-  Passive Ability(Nox Vision): Allows player to see through their own gas. Tactical Ability(Nox Gas Trap): Allows player to place canisters that when shot or activated by enemies releases damage causing gas. Ultimate Ability(Nox Gas Grenade): Covers large area in gas.

 Gibraltar-  Passive Ability(Gun Shield): Gun shield is deployed while player aims down sights. Blocks incoming fire. Tactical Ability(Dome of Protection): Player can place a dome shield that blocks incoming attacks. Lasts 15 seconds. Ultimate Ability(Defensive Bombardment): Player can call in mortar strike on designated position.

 Lifeline-  Passive Ability(Combat Medic): Use healing items 25% faster, auto-deploys defensive shield when reviving teammates, revive teammates faster. Tactical ability(D.O.C. Healing Drone): Player can call in drone of compassion (D.O.C.) that heals teammates over time. Ultimate Ability(Care Package): Player can call in "Drop Pod" with defensive gear.

 Mirage-  Passive Ability(Encore!): When player is knocked a decoy deploys for 5 seconds. Tactical Ability(Psyche Out): Player can send out decoy. Ultimate Ability(Vanishing Act): Player can deploy several decoys and cloak to hide their appearance.

 Pathfinder-  Passive Ability(Inside Knowledge): Player can scan a survey beacon that will show ring's next location. Tactical Ability(Grappling Hook): Player can deploy a grapple. Ultimate Ability(Zip-line Gun): Player can deploy zip-line for them and their team.

 Wraith-  Passive Ability(Voices from the Void): Player hears a voice that warns when danger is close. Tactical Ability(Into the Void): Player can quickly re-position. Ultimate Ability(Dimensional Rift): Player can create 2 rift locations.

 Sources 

https://www.ea.com/games/apex-legends/about/characters/bangalore