User:Bradyscheiner/Ethnic groups in Bosnia and Herzegovina/Coreou Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Brady Schneider


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Brady, great work on the article so far. The tone that you're using is consistent with the expectations that have been put out by Wikipedia and you are adding a good amount of information that will definitely be useful in the article as a whole. The current article looks very put together and I can clearly see the portion of the article that you are working on. I also like that you added links to other articles and made sure to cite everything. By adding a section about inter ethnic conflict, you have provided more context that is important when understanding the relationship between these groups. Furthermore, I believe that this adds more to your own understanding of topics that we have discussed in class thus far, like conflict.

The only criticism that I would say would be to add more information and sources in the future. I'm only seeing 3 in the sandbox and didn't see any in your bibliography, but I'm sure that you'll get those done before the article is done. Good job!