User:Brandon A. Curry/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Bustle

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Recently I had come across Saraatjie Baartman's story and the content of this article is connected to her story.

Evaluate the article
This article does a decent job at defining what a bustle is. There is no inclusion of the influence of bustles yet they have a source cited that is on the individual who was the influence for the fashion trends. There is zero inclusion about the concerns for figure that come with this topic. There should be a connection between the expectations placed on women's bodies. This can be easily sourced and built upon with the recent developments of physical expectations. This article is missing so many citations that could help improve it.