User:Brandon Figaro/Film criticism/Lvmcintire Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Brandon Figaro


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * user:BrandonFigaro|film critcism


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Film criticism

Evaluate the drafted changes
LEAD

The lead has been updated to reflect the changes made by my peer.

The lead has a good introductory sentence

The lead does list a brief description of articles major sections

I believe the lead is concise

CONTENT

The content appears to be relevant to the topic and up to date

TONE AND BALANCE

The content added is neutral in tone

SOURCES AND REFERENCES

Most of your references are dated. There are times when dated articles are appropriate and that seems to be the case here.

The links I checked worked appropriately

ORGANIZATION

The content to date is well written and well organized

OVERALL IMPRESSION

I am impressed at the amount of work you have done. Looking at yours is helping me see what I need to do.